At the end of the day yesterday I stepped back and looked at this & knew something was missing. I wasn’t an art major. I majored in music and worked in a factory for 30 years, but I could tell there was something “missing” in an important spot. It was getting too dark to see to paint by 4 PM, so I cleaned my brushes and came into the house to meditate on the problem.
An answer came to me at some point during the middle of the night, so stay tuned for further developments….